Pamela TS #2

Date/Time: May 14th 2021 (1pm -2pm)

Location: Zoom 

Topic/Skill: Writing, Thesis Statement 

Feedback provided to tutee: For this tutoring session, Shatha and I watched a short video discussing whether graffiti should be considered art or vandalism. Shatha took notes on the video as she watched and then wrote an introductory paragraph including a thesis statement on her stance. The feedback provided included correcting her paragraph organization, I.e. how to structure an intro paragraph. The feedback also included asking her to elaborate or write more on sentences that were short and lacked depth. There were also minor corrections on grammar mistakes. 

Lessons about tutoring and/or tutee you learned: 

I learned that Shatha has many ideas but struggles to translate them onto paper. I need to work with Shatha on improving her sentence structure and filling in missing gaps of information. Shatha also needs to work on proper word tenses. 

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